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Stop Imitating Everyone Else
Every Good Listing Has a Good Structure
1. Headline
2. Opening Statement
3. Narrative Description of Features
4. Special Promotion
5. Closing Statement and Call to Action
... But Don't Hype
Want to See the Exact Listings I Use?
One of the greatest skills you can possess in the real estate business is creating compelling listings that
sell properties quickly.
Unfortunately, the idea of “selling” is something that scares a lot of people out of the industry.
I used to HATE the idea of being a pushy “real estate salesman” and all the negative connotations associated with it—in my mind, anyway. When I finally realized that selling is a MUST for any successful real estate investor, I had to face the issue rather than run from it.
What I eventually found was that
selling real estate was actually a lot of fun!
After selling several properties in my first year, I realized I had
grossly misinterpreted
what it meant to promote listings and get properties sold. What I assumed would be an awkward, intimidating process turned out to be a GREAT way to develop my inner skills as a writer.
In my experience, most properties are
quite capable of selling themselves—
but ONLY IF you’ve
priced it right
,
promoted it adequately,
and created a listing that communicates clearly. Among others, it conveys why your property is the deal of a lifetime—why your buyers would be
absolutely crazy
not to take advantage of the opportunity.
Stop Imitating Everyone Else
Most of us have a lot of preconceived notions about what a property listing should look like. We’ve all browsed through plenty of other listings and subconsciously thought to ourselves:
Let me shatter this illusion for you right now.
You don’t need to write ads that look like everyone else’s.
In fact, doing so is probably the
worst thing you can do
if your goal is to get noticed. If you create listings that blend in with the crowd,
people will ignore you.
Looking “average” is precisely how NOT to be seen.
I’ll be the first to admit, however, that
it isn’t easy
to think outside the box and be original! For most of us, it’s not intuitive to be different and creative. That’s why so many listings are so boring and uninspiring.
To show you how to write listings well, we need to hit the “RESET” button and start from square one.
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Every Good Listing Has a Good Structure
Like a well-written college paper and well-designed real estate website, a good listing needs to follow a certain order and the right “flow.”
I usually lay out mine like this:
Let’s talk about each of the components that live inside a great listing.
1. Headline
When you’re posting your property for sale on a website like Craigslist, Facebook, or Zillow, your ad will have to compete with thousands of other listings. Therefore, it’s
imperative
that your listing has an eye-catching headline. It should look
different
.
Your headline is an extremely important part of your listing. In some cases, this is literally your
only shot
at getting a buyer to notice you! So you’d better find a way to stand out from the crowd.
Remember, you only have a
split second
to catch someone’s attention and get them to click on your listing, so this first impression is EVERYTHING. I’m not kidding! It doesn’t matter what the rest of your listing says if people aren’t compelled to click and read more in the first place.
What are the positives and negatives of the property you’re trying to sell? Can you make it funny? Will you say something that will make people look twice? Can you make your headline
stick out like a sore thumb
among all the other boring listings in your market?
Take a look at how this listing of mine sticks out on Craigslist:
What do you think? Does my headline look different enough to catch your attention? Does it stand out from the other headlines above and below it?
How to Catch Someone’s Attention
As you can see,
it’s not rocket science.
You just have to use your brain for a few extra seconds. Try to be
just obnoxious enough
to get noticed.
You don’t need to lie, exaggerate, or price it at 50% of market value. You just need to get people’s attention. How? By giving them a reason to click on your listing (even if it’s out of sheer curiosity).
It obviously doesn’t hurt to include a great picture (which will be displayed as a thumbnail) and a good price point to go along with your headline. On other websites like Facebook and Zillow, the picture is displayed in a VERY prominent position, so depending on the platform, the picture is worth carefully thinking about to some extent as well.
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2. Opening Statement
The first sentence of my listing gets right to the point of what the property is all about. The idea is to
immediately inform
my readers about what they’re looking at. In this first section, I might say something like:
Or:
As you can see, I’m simply answering the reader’s most pressing initial question:
“What am I looking at?”
I’m giving them a reason to
keep reading.
3. Narrative Description of Features
This is where the real fun begins. The idea in this section is to do two things:
I. Talk about the primary features of the property, such as:
Number of bedrooms/bathrooms.
Square footage of the building.
Size of the property (typically in acres).
Location/neighborhood/schools.
Garage (if any), number of stalls.
Outdoor extras, e.g., pool, patio, yard, deck, fire pits, etc.
Recent updates or renovations, e.g., windows, doors, appliances.
Unique characteristics, e.g., scenic overlook, basketball court, lakefront lot, etc.
II. Describe the property in a compelling and inspiring way.
Words can do an AMAZING job of selling real estate (or anything else, for that matter). Some
copywriters
get paid over $150,000 to write
one
piece of sales copy! There is SERIOUS VALUE in your ability to write well, so don’t lose sight of the fact that
your words can be extremely powerful
when used correctly.
And this is your opportunity to use them to your advantage
.
For example, I’d like you to compare and contrast these two property listings:
Example 1: Typical Listing
Example 2: Well-Written Listing
Communicating Clearly Sells Well
As you can probably see, these two examples are
not equal.
It takes
real effort
to be creative and think of descriptive words that will make your property sound appealing. Most people don’t have the patience (or they just don’t care enough) to go the extra mile in this area, but putting forth this extra effort can make a HUGE difference in the way buyers perceive your p
roperty.Some people will find that they excel in the area of “creative writing” naturally. Others will find that it’s a major struggle. Not everyone is gifted with the same ability to find words that create amazing mental imagery like this, so if you aren’t gifted in this area,
don’t worry.
At the bottom of this blog post, you’ll have a chance to get your hands on
a TON of my marketing materials
that will make this whole process a lot easier for you, so keep reading!
4. Special Promotion
This won’t always apply to your listing. But if you want to sell a property FAST, this is your opportunity to give buyers an extra little “nudge” toward taking action.
I always envision the typical buyer looking at my listing. In many cases, they’re interested,
but they need a good reason to pick up the phone and call me
. This is where a special promotion can be useful.
Some examples of a “special promotion” could be any of the following:
Offering
seller financing
on the property.
For a limited time, offering to pay for 100% of the buyer’s closing costs.
Offering to sell the property in the form of a
lease-purchase
or
rent-to-own.
Temporarily offering a small discount from the listed price.
Feel free to add whatever incentives you think will open the door to more potential buyers and get people to take action. Get creative with it—just keep it legal!
One of the many reasons why special promotions are so effective is because they give the listing a sense of
scarcity
by conveying the idea that this opportunity
won’t be around forever
(and it probably won’t last through the end of the week). If people don’t take action now, they’ll wish they had!
Just to give you a quick example, whenever I offer seller financing on my properties, I’ll say something like this:
This particular example doesn’t highlight scarcity per se. Still, it does notify buyers that financing doesn’t need to be an obstacle for them to buy the property. And with vacant land properties, this is a MAJOR benefit because most conventional banks won’t finance vacant land deals.
5. Closing Statement and Call to Action
This is where you wrap it up and
tell your readers what to do.
Don’t be afraid to ratchet up the sense of urgency and remind them of the very real possibility that
this is the last chance they’ll ever have to buy this property.
Here’s an example:
… But Don’t Hype
While writing the perfect listing, I realize it’s easy to creep into the territory of over-promising and painting an unrealistic picture of what the subject property can actually deliver.
There is a fine line between painting a positive word picture about a property and overselling a property. The goal here is the portray the property in its best possible light without overstating its “greatness.”
The fact is,
most people know BS when they see it
. If you come blasting out of the gate with claims about your property that are clearly embellished or outright false,
you’re not going to fool anyone
. At best, you’ll seriously tarnish your reputation in your market. Worse, you might even create some new enemies along the way!
The trick to selling is not to “trick” anyone. The goal is to be very clear about why your property is an amazing opportunity. And if your asking price is in line with the market, you can help a lot of people “connect the dots” and realize that
your property is exactly what they need.
The most successful salespeople know how to convey this information seamlessly and effectively, all while catering to the emotional needs of their buyers. You don’t need to oversell it or make it into something it’s not. Just describe your property and its features in a way that will help buyers see its potential usefulness and how it fits in with their dreams of property ownership.
Help them to picture themselves in your property and come to their own conclusion as to why it’s the right property for them.
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Want to See the Exact Listings I Use?
As I explained above, I have no doubt that you are FULLY CAPABLE of creating your own listings that will make your properties get noticed and sound
amazing.
I’ve tried to outline my process for you above (and include some small excerpts throughout), so you can get a feel for how I approach this.
At the same time,
I completely understand
that we weren’t all born with the “creative gene” to effortlessly whip up these kinds of listings in 60 seconds. While we’re all capable, this kind of thing doesn’t always come easy, and some of us just don’t care enough to go the extra mile here.
I get it—
I really do. With this in mind, I’ve taken the time to put together a
fast and easy solution
for those who need ideas and inspiration that you can easily implement into your own listings.
Here’s what I want to give you:
50 attention-grabbing headlines carefully engineered to
get noticed.
20 property description templates designed to
make properties sound irresistible.
200 powerful adjectives that will
boost the desirability of your property.
Brief video tutorial on how to
write an effective property listing.
Short guide on how to use these tools to
sell properties fast.
If you want to see an example of how I use the
Headlines & Listings Pack,
you can watch as I integrate it into this property listing through
Zillow
:
Again, there’s nothing particularly “magical” about these resources or the words I use. I’ve just invested a lot of time and energy into creating listings that
blow my competition out of the water.
And I want YOU to do the same thing.
If you think this kind of material would be helpful as you’re creating your future property listings—I want to make this FULL package available to you right here, right now
.
This little arsenal of
proven ad copy
has the power to transform your real estate ads and give your sales efforts a MAJOR boost over the long haul.
If you’re serious about getting properties sold
sooner rather than later,
I encourage you to make this small investment (which is easily worth 50x the price tag shown below—
no exaggeration
). Feel free to copy or edit each sample listing to fit your needs or just use it as inspiration to create your own masterpieces.
If you’re ready to take your real estate listings to the next level, you can get started right now:
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